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Postby pawsnhooves » Sat Jul 29, 2006 3:34 pm

#ed_op#DIV#ed_cl#I agree with Hope, he is gorgeous.  I also agree that perhaps a few personality details would help but I think the ad is very well constructed.#ed_op#/DIV#ed_cl##ed_op#DIV#ed_cl#I'm sure the right person will come along.  He is stunning, perhaps he sounds too good to be true?  I'm not sure why people have not snapped him up.#ed_op#/DIV#ed_cl##ed_op#DIV#ed_cl#If I were looking, I'd consider him.  #ed_op#/DIV#ed_cl##ed_op#DIV#ed_cl#Best of luck.#ed_op#/DIV#ed_cl#
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